Wildcat Whisper .22lr Moderator Review

[TattooedGun]

Have a ganders:

http://blog.stegough.com/uk-custom-shop ... or-review/

Any thoughts and suggestions on writing style or things to add in or amend for future mod reviews, please let me know.

Hope someone finds it useful information :)

[bradaz11]

nice review! lovely looking can too. may have to enquire about a 9mm one

only two things I'd mention...
this sentence made no sense on first read, and on 2nd it still wasn't clear.
"Prior to this test, the only thing that concerning me is that being conducted on a range with a steel walled trap the ring of the bullet hitting the steel butt-stop may have skewed the results, as it happens it appears not at all."

you also used some notations on your results, like FRP? and an X on one result, but didn't explain what they meant. same as SAK, at first, i thought you meant a Swiss Army Knife. :)

[TattooedGun]

nice review! lovely looking can too. may have to enquire about a 9mm one

only two things I'd mention...
this sentence made no sense on first read, and on 2nd it still wasn't clear.
"Prior to this test, the only thing that concerning me is that being conducted on a range with a steel walled trap the ring of the bullet hitting the steel butt-stop may have skewed the results, as it happens it appears not at all."

you also used some notations on your results, like FRP? and an X on one result, but didn't explain what they meant. same as SAK, at first, i thought you meant a Swiss Army Knife. :)

Cheers Bradaz.

I have re-written this sentence.

The FRP? was a note to self from before getting the results to make a note of First Round Pop if present on the moderator. It was not, but i forgot to remove the note...

The X was also a note from before. all values were place held as I wrote the majority of the review before getting these results.

I'm not sure what SAK stands for in order to give a better explanation...!

[bradaz11]

happy to help

I think SAK is just a name they went with, whether its initials maybe? it was just the wording of it, SAK and cleaning rod, made me wonder if it was another can or you were gouging lumps out of the threads with a blade.

but as I say, a very nice review, and if work allows me to, I will be perusing their website ASAP :)

[safetyfirst]

Had one of these for a while, great can.